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Name: Ashelynn Schmetterling

Nicknames: Ash, Schmutt, Mutt

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Birthday: 11/8

Height: 5'6

Weight: 111

Orientation: Bisexual

Relationship Status: Hopping back and forth between multiple guys.

Prized Posessions: Pandy, her stuffed teddy bear.

Addictions: Alcoholic, sex addict.

Style: Ash's style has often been called slutty, but she calls it 'shmexxxay'. The weather doesn't affect how she dresses at all; she's worn shorts in the winter, and skinnys in the summer. Her shirts are low-cut, brightly colored, and often show off quite a bit of her stomach. She doesn't own any sweatshirts or jackets because she always uses her boyfriends'. Skinny jeans, flare jeans, short skirts and shorts are all a part of Ash's wardrobe. Mutt has an entire closet dedicated to shoes, and almost never wears the same pair twice. Various earrings, rings, bracelets, pins and sticky notes personalize her look.
Makeup: Heavy eyeliner and eyeshadow is all Schmutt uses on a daily basis. Her eyeliner color ranges across the rainbow, depending on her mood, while her eyeshadow is usually kept black. On special occassions (or when she's having trouble getting a guy) she may use lipstick, but she doesn't like wearing it.

History: Mutt's mother nearly died during her birth, and fell into a coma. Her father blamed her for his wife's coma, and neglected and abused her until she was five. At this time, her mother came out of her coma. She loved her daughter, and when Ash told her what her husband had been doing for the past five years the two of them moved to Germany. Ash's mother always took proper care of her, and they were happy without a man in the house. When Ashelynn was seven she met a boy named Jerrick and became his friend because his mother had left him in Germany when he got lost. For a year he lived with her and her mother, until his mom came back, and he left for New York at the end of that summer. On Ash's 10th birthday, her father found her and her mother. He drunkenly attempted to beat Ash, but her mother protected her and he beat her instead. Her mother was beaten to near death and put in the hospital. When Ashelynn's father realized what he had done, he began using heroin to try and forget. Her mother died in the hospital from a brain aneurism. Ash was taken into custody by him and they moved to New York, where Ash was often neglected and left home alone while her father got drugs and had screwed around with prostitutes. When her father found out she was bisexual he refused to be in the same room with her. Mutt grew up practically alone, except for Jerrick of whom she had found again when she moved to New York. At age 18 she moved in with Jerrick in his mansion.

Appearance: Schmutt's slender figure is what usually first catches a guy's attention, accompanied by her smooth, rounded face framed by feathery, chestnut-colored hair; to see her hair chestnut-colored is a rare thing though, because Ash is constantly dying it different colors and cutting it to different lengths. A delicate neck widens down to slim shoulders and a small chest, while dainty hands with brightly painted nails play with the bracelets that often hang on her wrists. Smokey gray, almond-shaped eyes fringed with thick lashes dart everywhere, never focusing on one thing. Toned legs slowly taper down to cute, tiny feet that Schmutt would do anything for to make a little bigger.

Personality: Selfish, flirty, slutty and fucked in the head are all words that can describe Ashelynn. Her high-self confidence leads her to believe that she can do whatever she wants with no consequences; obviously, this is wrong, but she has yet to figure that out. She pretends to be the perfect person when first meeting someone, then stabs them in the back when they trust her and expects them to be able to forgive her immediately. Schmutt relies heavily on violence, a trait she picked up from her father as a child. Tending to be self-centered, Mutt doesn't care about anyone but herself unless they're close to her; of course, it's nearly imposible for anyone to stay close to her after all the shit she puts them through on a regular basis. When drunk, Ash's personality transforms completely; she turns into a cuddly, loveable little girl who can't tell a lie to save her life. This is the side of Mutt that most of the guys hang around for; the side that can be completely dominated, the girl that'll give in and do anything.
Eh. Might add more. I'm pretty happy with it so far. :) Ash is by far one of my favorite OCs. <3
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Alex-Machiavelli's avatar
Wow! This character has been through the ringer. o.o

What I liked: You are very detailed in your bio; I have no questions for you, and you explain her backstory in a way that gets the point across without burdening us with trivial details-- you get to the point, and I like that.

What I think could be improved: In terms of characters in general, I have met many characters like Ashelynn. They're "rough, hard-core, bitchy," and they have had a hard life. Perhaps make something different about her, something... hmm, how can I express this? It follows a line. I was able to predict other traits she'd have the moment I saw one.

But it's always the story counts; if you have a predicble character in an unpredictable story (though generally I've found that if the character is predictable, so is the story) then you can make it work. It all depeds on the writer and I didn't know if you were aware of these things or not, so I figured I'd tell you. =)

I hope you don't mind. If you don't want the constructive criticism, please just say so and I won't list my improvements again. I don't want to offend you. T^T

I say eet nicely! I ish gentle bunneh, and I haz fangs, but... I use dem fer goooood! x3